GỢI Ý ĐỀ IELTS WRITING TASK 2 NGÀY 13/3/2021

Từ đồng nghĩa, trái nghĩa:

put personal information online = store personal/private data on the Internet = online data storage = reveal oneself online

Online = the Internet = cyberspace = digital society 

Từ vựng theo chủ đề: cyberspace, the Internet, online data storage, cybersecurity, information security, cybercrime, data exploitation, identity thief, social networking sites

Gợi ý: Dạng bài DISCUSSION ESSAY, trong đó người viết phân tích và thảo luận hai khía cạnh và PHẢI thể hiện được rõ quan điểm tích cực hay tiêu cực với nhận định được đưa ra ở đề bài. Với bài này, người viết nêu ra các mặt tiêu cực của việc lưu trữ thông tin online tuy nhiên vẫn khẳng định đây là một xu hướng tích cực bởi vì các lợi ích nó đem lại.

Đoạn 1: Admittedly, people are likely to experience serious invasions of privacy with their data stored on the Internet. 

• There has been empirical evidence that personal information, including users’ contact details, social security numbers and bank accounts, can be easily stolen online by anonymous hackers. 

  • => Consequently, the targeted individuals would encounter a multitude of risks such as phishing emails, identity theft or even property fraud, which decisively leads to many real-life tragedies. 

• Although the authorities have been constantly improving the digital forensics systems to prevent data exploitation, Internet users might have to accept the fact that the vulnerabilities of private information would remain inevitable in online life.

Đoạn 2: Nonetheless, I believe that this is a desirable trend because of the manifold benefits derived from storing private data online.  

• Firstly, data cookies, which are a common form of auto-filled personal information, offer people great ease of access when browsing the Internet. 

  • With cookies, sites can keep ones signed in and remember their actions and preferences => saves users a considerable amount of time and effort and facilitates their online experience. 

• Besides, exposing private and professional information on social networking sites, such as LinkedIn, would be favourable for both employees and recruiters. 

  • By revealing themselves online, professionals can easily attract head-hunters with their profiles => opening up more career opportunities => increasing ones’ chance of getting employed.