GỢI Ý ĐỀ IELTS WRITING TASK 2 NGÀY 23/1/2021

Từ khóa:

Adults = grown-ups

Live with = reside with = stay under the same roof with

Complete education = complete school = complete their studies = finish their education = graduate from universities

Find jobs = have jobs = hold jobs = land jobs = secure jobs 

Advantages = benefits = positive impacts/ effects/ influences

Disadvantages = drawbacks = negative impacts / effects/ influences

Gợi ý: Dạng ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY phân tích về ưu điểm - nhược điểm, trong đó người viết cần phải bàn đến cả hai mặt lợi và hại của một vấn đề, cũng như đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân rằng liệu vấn đề đang có nhiều mặt lợi hơn hay là ngược lại. Quan điểm của người viết nên được thể hiện ở các đoạn mở bài, thân bài số 2 và kết luận.

Đoạn 1: Những lợi ích của việc sống chung với bố mẹ sau khi đã tốt nghiệp và đi làm

Ý 1: Young people can economize when staying under the same roof with their parents.

• Can reduce living expenses but still meet their basic needs, such as renting accommodation or paying bills

• Have an opportunity to live comfortably without worrying too much about the expensive living cost, especially when residing in big cities

Ý 2:  Living together can build stronger bonds between family members.

• Younger people could look after older ones or receive support from older family members.

• For example, parents provide financial assistance for young people faced with postgraduate difficulties and young adults take care of their parents, ensure that they are in good health.

Đoạn 2: Những hạn chế khi sống chung cùng bố mẹ sau khi đã tốt nghiệp và đi làm.

Ý 1: Those who choose this lifestyle may be less independent than others.

• By living with their parents and relying on their guidance, adults will have little room for personal growth. 

• It will be hard for them to manage themselves and deal with different challenges when moving out or having a family of their own in the future.

Ý 2: There is a high chance that young people’s space and privacy will be invaded.

• When residing with parents, it is not uncommon to see their personal privacy being disturbed.

• For example, parents could enter their rooms at any time or there are certain disciplines that they need to follow.

In conclusion, although the advantages of living with parents after graduating and having a job do exist, I believe this choice brings about more disadvantages as young adults may lose freedom and fail to learn how to be on their own.