HƯỚNG DẪN GIẢI ĐỀ THI IELTS WRITING NGÀY 4/5/2019
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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development? (dated: May 4th, 2019)
Từ khóa:
Từ đồng nghĩa, trái nghĩa:
today = in today’s society = in modern age = in present at = these days
spend time doing sth = allocate time for sth
computer games = video games = electronic games = computerized games
sports = physical activities
Gợi ý: Dạng bài TWO-PART ESSAY, trong đó người viết PHẢI trả lời câu hỏi tại sao trẻ em ngày nay dành nhiều thời gian cho trò chơi điện tử thay vì các môn thể thao và nêu quan điểm của mình về vấn đề này. Bài gợi ý này không ủng hộ xu hướng trên.
Đoạn 1: Nguyên nhân vì sao trẻ em dành nhiều thời gian cho trò chơi điện tử thay vì các môn thể thao
Ý 1: The proliferation of entertaining technology has transformed video games from simple 2D images into virtual worlds in which players hardly distinguish between themselves and the game characters. → In other words, electronic games have been designed to be over-engrossing, overwhelming other forms of entertainment and easily capturing children’s attention.
Ý 2: As computerized games growth = grow to new levels, children develop their sedentary lifestyle correspondingly. → The fact that children are familiar with long sitting erects a psychological barrier to outdoor physical activities.
Đoạn 2: Quan điểm của người viết về xu hướng trên (hoàn toàn phản đối)
Ý 1: It is scientifically proved that addiction to computerized games is highly associated with dangerous health problems. → For example, children who allocate a substantial part of their time for video games are more likely to contract cardiovascular and osteoarthritis diseases.
Ý 2: The majority of games on electronic devices are violent rather than educational. → This means excessive exposure to those game plots builds up children’s mental impairment and tendency towards anti-social behaviors, contributing to higher crime rate in the future.